Sus Lecciones Traviesas

  • Genre: Romance
  • Author: Witchhazel
  • Translator:
  • Status: Ongoing

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0)
``` [ Advertencia: Contenido para Adultos ] —Harper, deja de desnudarme con la mirada. La trama no va por ahí... TODAVÍA. Harper McKenzie, una novelista novata de novelas web, tiene un problema: le cuesta escribir escenas románticas. Como alguien con una experiencia casi inexistente en la materia en la vida real, no consigue plasmar la química íntima adecuadamente, y esos capítulos siempre salen secos y vergonzosos. Afortunadamente para ella, Harper encuentra un(a) editor(a) independiente dispuesto a trabajar en su escritura. Pero, ¿la sorpresa? Ese(a) editor(a) resulta ser su amigo de la infancia y su primer flechazo de la vida. ¿Qué sucede ahora cuando él le ofrece lecciones personales sobre cómo escribir el romance más candente... y escenas de amor? -------------- Nota: esta es una historia divertida, acogedora y dulce con una trama de bajo drama. Sin triángulos amorosos, sin malentendidos, sin pérdidas de memoria / accidentes de coche / enfermedades terminales / etc. Abundan los contenidos maduros, empezando de manera suave pero calentándose rápidamente. ¡Estás advertido! -------------- Avance: Deslizó su sujetador por sus hombros y, con un trabajo imposiblemente rápido y hábil, ató la prenda de encaje alrededor de sus muñecas. —Abre más las piernas —ordenó. El ya vacilante corazón de Harper se paralizó aún más. El mando en su tono era extranjero, pero la embargaba como una ola de calor, y aunque apenas podía imaginar lo lasciva que debía lucir, con las manos atadas y los muslos abiertos como un ofrecimiento a ser devorada, podía sentir la ardiente necesidad enrollándose más y más caliente en su interior. Su cuerpo obedecía ansiosamente por su propia cuenta, abriéndose completamente tal y como le habían dicho. Eli sonrió. Moviendo entre sus piernas, dejó besos ardientes a lo largo de su muslo interior, dejando pequeñas llamas crepitantes a su paso. —Buena chica. Ahora, ¿qué debería decir tu personaje a continuación? —Un dedo se deslizó sobre su carne húmeda y deseosa en un suave y resbaladizo roce, haciéndole el corazón detenerse por completo mientras un gemido se le escapaba—. Escribe la siguiente línea para mí, ¿qué debería decir antes de desnudarte con mi lengua y hacerte gritar mi nombre? ```

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  1. NeroCladius
    NeroCladius rated it
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  1. Fu_Hua_
    Fu_Hua_ rated it
    (Long review incoming) Up front caveat: The translation quality should actually get 2 stars, not 5, but overall this is a 5/5 novel for me because it makes up for the mistranslations in other ways. For a novel with so many flaws, this is a gem. I’ve been binge reading Hollywood novels lately and can say with a fair amount of certainty that this one is the best. The first one I read was “I am Hollywood”, which was also excellent, but it had two flaws that put it below this one: First, it was a dropped novel. I can’t stand it when a novel I enjoy reading is suddenly dropped by an author or translator. And second, it lost focus on being a “Hollywood Novel” (capital H capital N) and meandered about in the world of investing and corporate bullshit. The Best Director, on the other hand, remains true to its purpose, chronicling the life of the MC from the moment he gets his chest up until the very end. An end, might I add, that came too soon; I’d have liked this novel to be at least twice the length it is. Three times as long to account for the skippable chapters that add nothing to the plot or story. Which leads me to my first major complaint - filler content. I edit translated Chinese webnovels for a living, and as part of my job I’m exposed to all manner of methods WebNovel authors use to pad their word count. See, Qidian (and other webnovel publishers like 17k and Zongheng) pays authors a per-word rate. So authors have found many ways to increase word count, like in-chapter repetition, peanut galleries, long, drawn-out navelgazing bullshit, and so on. This novel has a particularly terrible method of padding its word count creep in about a third of the way through it: box office reports and critic reviews. Seriously, it gets to the point later in the novel where entire chapters are just dry lists of what movies made how much money that week. Out of the 500-odd chapters total, I’d say around 200 of them are skippable because the numbers aren’t even for the MC’s movies. And another hundred chapters or so have box office reports and critic reviews take up half the chapter without any warning whatsoever. It’ll skip directly from dialogue to box office and/or reviews without warning or any kind of transition whatsoever. It’s kinda bad like that. And the second major flaw is that the translator gets the names wrong. There’s a lot of inconsistency in names (Kevin Spacey and Kiefer Sutherland show up a lot, and Keira Knightley is referred to as Natalie every time she shows up), but what’s worse is that the translator didn’t bother looking up the correct American names of quite a few of the films mentioned. He or she also misses the times when the name of the movies change, like The Departed becoming The Deceased out of nowhere. As a translator, you can screw up anything *but* names. Names are the only thing that you must keep 100% accuracy and consistency on. So why did I rate this 5/5 despite those two massive flaws? Simple: character development. One of the things that almost no webnovel ever does is develop a character, much less the main characters. A common mistake they make is thinking that increasing strength (bigger numbers/Xianxia maths) is the same thing as character development. Spoiler: it is not. But in The Best Director, the entire main cast of characters grows and evolves, becoming better actors, better people, or just… better. It comes at the cost of removing conflict from the novel entirely, but the tradeoff is beyond worth it. It makes up for the cardinal sin of inconsistent names, it makes up for the virtually 300ish chapters you can either skim or skip entirely, it makes up for all of the other minor flaws that were so tiny I didn’t even bother remembering them. But wait! There’s more!The novel also actually has a proper ending. I may have wanted some of the storylines to continue (like how the MC had a whole big scene about buying the rights to adapt a certain major bestselling series, but the novel ended before he got around to doing just that), but the ending was really good. The author took their time to bring things to a proper close and it was very poignant at that. Those two virtues covereth a multitude of sins. So my advice is to read this novel. You won’t regret it.
  1. YiZaha
    YiZaha rated it
    You will regret not reading novel as its a masterpiece author has written great characters and novel plot flows very nicely and as long as the author continues like this his novel will be one of the best
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  1. Fiaran
    Fiaran rated it
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  1. DaoistlY470m
    DaoistlY470m rated it
    The author is really thoughtful. He did very well in turning the disease into a blessing. The character is really overpowered. This novel has great potential and is unique. I wanna read more so please support it well.
  1. Daoist57BLYp
    Daoist57BLYp rated it
    Very good ☺️...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
  1. AbdoNasser8115
    AbdoNasser8115 rated it
    Peerless. The only word that fits this book. Everything is on point! The intrigue, character complexities and dynamic family relationships all cluster to create pure, natural drama. The dark and psychological factors of the book makes it all the more gripping and relatable as the characters are properly portrayed. The plot itself is a masterpiece! Kudos to the author for keeping me addicted, can't wait to see how everything turns out... 5 stars, no cap.

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