Survivor Guilt

  • Genre: War
  • Author: Nez_ar47
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.2 / 5.0, 17 votes)
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  1. StewartReginald
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    Just wowww... I enjoying to read this novel..I realy thank u for this gift..I just wanted to tell u that how much I really enjoyed to read this novel..thank u authour..Keep rocking 🔥..l really excited to what is next adventure..Pls let me know
  1. HottIce
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    I really like martial oddessy, this is the second time am reading it, I wish the author can write the part 2.l love the mixture of comedy, action and romance in the novel, thanks author
  1. spectermerlin
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    Hi, I'm the translator of this novel and I am here to say Su Yang will be back soon. You have my word! Keep an eye out!I'm also the translator of The Devil's Cage and my own novel The Eccentric Exorcist (to fill the 140 words...)
  1. Kroxius
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    dari penglaman membaca, ini adalah salah satuu novel yang menarik untuk dibaca alur cerita sangat seru dan sangat menarik untuk diulik jalan ceritanya.
  1. DraconicOverlord
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    Added into library, the synopsis looks promising so the story would be great! Keep up with the good work! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
  1. Ranch64
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    Awesome novel! it gives me sci-fi movie vibes and I love it! The authors way of describing the soroundings makes you feel like you are in the book too. Really intriguing storyline, only some grammar mistakes here and there but they are nothing compared to how original and unique this novel is! 👏🏻
  1. Minx_999
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    Truly a different take on the system— with its setting being in the cultivation world and the designated person as a native cultivator instead of an isekaied person from the modern world. An intriguing topic that I’ll admit. :3There are a few things I would like to mention, but to be perfectly honest, your grammar and spacing is quite good and above average for most of the reviews I’ve given.1. Punctuation: You appear to have fragmented sentences for the sake of smoothness, but I think it would be wise to limit it as readers might find it distasteful ( which doesn’t include me in spite my bunch of corrections since I believe reviewing includes giving advice in comments aside from reviews ). Additionally, quoted sentences sometimes lack a period at the end.I would also add that fragments as well as missing commas before or after ‘-ing’ words as well as after quoted words are the main issue I see as of now. There are some incorrectly spelled words or phrases, but that is few and far in between. ( Also, I would suggest rereading from chapters 1-5 in your novel to look for my comments as you may not be able to see them all from the notifications alone. )2. Show not tell: There were a few instances I wished that the emotions the characters felt were on their face and not stated in words. For example in chapter 2, “Quan Ding who was worried about him checked his pulse to ensure what had happened but came to a shocking realization...” could be altered to “Quan Ding’s brows furrowed in worry as he checked his pale brother’s pulse before uttering in disbelief...”In my opinion, it would spice things up a bit more while also shortening lengthier sentences. All in all, do take my words with a grain of salt and don’t change due to my words if it disrupts your storyline. I think this in itself has promise to be popular in the long run. So keep up the good work, Author !
  1. tellmewhae
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    I like this novel a lot, easy to read and great character, I can’t wait to read the new charters.
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