Supreme Origin: Time King

  • Genre： Fantasy
  • Author： StormEliteVII
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  • Status： Ongoing

  • Rating(3.8 / 5.0) ★

Join Elijah Branches, a six year old boy in his path to trinity while he slowly discovers the Supreme Origin.

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  1. Arlen Frank
    Arlen Frank rated it
    so far everything is good but the is one small problem maybe i did not notice it but the seem to be very little information about the cultivation path, i figure moral is warrior spiritual is a mage as for divine could it be with occupation plus a divine ability or something like that? maybe i am wrong.  but other that that good book, cant wait for the next update.
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  1. Page Gill
    Page Gill rated it
    There is no pacing at all in this novel. One minute we are in a scene, the next, it jumps 4 months later or a couple weeks later. It's just not good. Time jumps are all well and good if they are done right...this..this is not done right.
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  1. Angela Antoinette
    Angela Antoinette rated it
    안전놀이터 Director Kim expressed his surprise, saying, "As the practice continues, I can see that the weight goes well, so I wanted to say, 'You still have that strength and (body) speed.' However, Choo himself explains that it is not that special. It is a routine that he has been doing since Major League Baseball (MLB)..
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  1. Moira Steele
    Moira Steele rated it
    Very underrated and unappreciated..

    A great book. Apparently many just decided to ride on the hate train.
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  1. Betty Anderson
    Betty Anderson rated it
    Stupid story, terrible grammar, reading it equal to torturing yourself. Plus mix up storyline even i dont know whats happening. Overall garbage novel. I mean the point of writing a novel is to let your reader understand what you are writing, the emotion behind it but this **** is useless. I try to force myself reading it but i gave up until chapter 56.
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  1. Jill Kingsley
    Jill Kingsley rated it
    A funny use of the norse mythology and the others with a fast pacing rather nice if compared with many other novels way too slow in a rather complicated world where gods, magic and cultivation are mixed
    Though you really need an editor to correct the mistakes because sometimes it can be hard to understand what you mean, I also saw that you repeated some sentences twice on some chapters. So an editor could help you correct what maybe you won't see when doing it yourself (don't forget that your readers will be happy to help you if you need us for that).
    And also it's only my opinion but 6 and 10 years old is kind of too young for what happens to them even if they are more mature or grown up.
    Keep going and good luck Mr/Ms Author
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  1. Fay Symons
    Fay Symons rated it
    This novel is good.Sure,it might not have good grammar and the story sometimes not making sense it still is awesome.A whole 112 chapters are free and the main charater is strong but not too strong.All in all i would recommend this novel!
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