"Be'Lanna Satoru, daughter of General Cayedn Satoru" Be'Lanna said, raising her right hand she placed it over her heart and slightly bowed. I took note of how she introduced herself, as it must be a custom here on Teranovis.
"No, you cannot promise! God knows how she will deal with you if you go back. Even if she will not deal with you, she will not let me and Qi An, go. Mu Zheng, you must not be deceived by her!"
"Ah, tak apa... abang Lan.. dia kawan Laila.. Laila minta diri sekejap ya?" Laila yang keihatan malu dengan tindakan Amir tadi menarik lelaki itu ke arah koridor hospital dengan reaksi tak puas hati.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
A fun read with a simple direct writing style. No repeated descriptions nor any info dumps, and not even weird flowery words. A delightful light read. --------The main problems: - Ghost novel, but author uses all his power to make the ghost irrelevant.[MC is a ghost, and is innately Spirit & Intelligence dependant in terms of stats, he also mainly has skills that use mana.Realistically, he should focus on building on his strengths and increase his ghost power and ghostly skills. However, Author rarely has him in ghost form, never focuses on building ghost power nor skills.MC raises stats equally.MC even now has a solid ghost body where he eats and drinks.What's the point of being a ghost? Now he's basically just a human with extra steps.];;;;;;;;- A very obnoxiously dumb naive MC. [MC is a 28YO Lawyer. Yet his decisions here are atrocious, he's not cautious and always shows off his skills attracting trouble, he doesn't think of his future nor how his actions or lack of actions mights affect him, his thought process is very childish and naive, he's careless, he acts like an inexperienced 10YO, he's so obvious in his lies, he's pathetic, his decisions and choices are not properly thought through and most of them are nonsense and bullshit] -----------Honestly, I'm mainly dropping this story because of the second point. I don't mind the that the ghost part is irrelevant now, since the story is a light fun read. But the MC being like this is just insulting to readers.
Trully stellar work, Higly recomended to read.Only one problem and that is that the world looks like cultivation world and use of empiral measurement system
Hey, the author here doing a review! Hope you enjoy the story and if you feel the need to share it around to others you could try to hit it with one of those power stones... Anyway, I need to get back to writing. Hope you all get some good reading done. :D
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