supreme dragon dual cultivation system

I love the storyline, but the book itself is in great need of editing. The pronouns switch throughout the book, sometimes causing confusion as to whom they’re speaking about. Some sections could be made a little more to avoid having to reread to understand what was going on

A good read. I love the characters and the intro of the book. Good job Author.

when will this nonsense end ...... it started amazing and now its annoying