Bad Grammar, not to the point of shty Chinese translators (which I would rather read), but nevertheless, bad in a way that doesn't make you choke, but endlessly annoy.The plot seems cool, great even - nice, but the fact that Aaron (The system itself is so... idk)The trope is good, but I think it has bad execution, especially the overly annoying dialogues involved. It makes it feel like, things that are tragic become comedic.The timelines at the start are a bit messed up too. Well, not really, but going back to the forth from past to present just strikes a nerve.I usually stick to, and bear to read even the trashiest of trash plots, but as of the moment, I can't bear this novel.(I can also smell our fellow ph genes)
Through its masterful storytelling and nuanced character development, this novel takes readers on a transformative journey, unveiling layers of complexity in its exploration of the human experience. From moments of profound emotion to gripping twists and turns, it captivates from beginning to end, leaving an indelible impression long after the final page is turned.
Outstanding. The main character is not some weak dumb pushover or some naive young boy. i always enjoy when a MC gets going quickly and doesn't take forever to start building their strength. And great spicy chapters too. Worth everyone interested in Taboo relationships and Systems/LitRPG giving it a shot.
The next thing I knew I woke up seeing the brightness of day peeking in at me through what seemed like a widening hole. Muscles all around me squeezed and pushed. I was being forced out of something like a torpedo! Was I experiencing my own birth?
"Let's go now to sleep" Josh said and stand on his sit. He take all the dishes, the girl wanted to help but Josh stop her. Josh put again the dishes on the hole. White, little blue and the fairy goes on their perspective sleep area.
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