Es muy mala... Durante la lectura me tuve que tomar pausas en cada capítulo para reflexionar si debería continuar leyendo, el cap 7 fue mí límite. La novela es muy forzada al máximo lo cual se deja claro con las barras de metal (quién se perfora el cuerpo con barras de metal, solo para verse mejor?) Es un Don el cual se puede desarrollar como un músculo no es totalmente necesario el uso de las barras, o como mínimo no de las grandes.
I never try to write anything like this but for this story, I have to. My first thought was how far it could move me. When I read the first chapter, I just blinked and nodded. Alright. Not that bad. But when I finished the chapter Neo-Genesis. I wept tears. Yes, this man did cry. I was surprised that the author has a way to tell the story. If this novel were a man, he would have a high IQ and EQ because the storyteller is smart and smart to move this reader to feel like the characters. I like most of everything, plot, characters, the warmth of this family, and some little hints that the author already put in at the beginning. What I like the most is ‘less is more.’ The narration is not overdramatic. The author just tells his story and uses surrounding tools to show details which is simple but ‘deep’. Great job. Undisclosure is one of a few fictions I read on my smartphone and did not check how long the chapter is. I read it smoothly. There are some holes, for example, POV, the unnatural conversation. Or the writing of some scenes is not powerful enough to build emotions. But it’s just a little thing that I can overlook. I recommend it. This story should deserve more views.
Exceptionally Intriguing and Beautifully Written so far. Looking forward to him evolving with the Holy blood physic as well as mastering more of Master Bahun's skills
"Mages...? Even cultivators? GODS ?.... Is this some kind of novel or what...?"Mana was too shocked to notice that someone already opened the wooden door and was standing in front of him.
Damain kept his head down as he walked until he got to the factory of the red covenant. They we're in the red king territory this was the dumping place for those unable to receive the power of any covenant they we're the ones fated to be under the heels of those with power.
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