Strongest Businessman of the Cultivation World

good novel... starting few chapters feel slow but bear with it until he auction chapter ...plot will pickup from there...side characters are well fleshed out and the adults don't just starts believing in the mc cause he's the MC . MC worked hard to get their support . world building is a little bit slow but done through subtle dialogues instead of whole bunch of text.
overall well thought out slice of life novel where MC is trying to earn money, become strong enough to protect his money, and his group and subtly trying to change the world.

MC's stupidity is so bothering I don't know how he is a successful businessman on earth. Maybe they shouldn't say that he is a successful businessman in the first place because of how stupid he is. I also skip chapters because his stupidity makes me uncomfortable. there are so many ways to make the story funny but not in stupid ways. once, twice stupid moves are alright but every chapter is like a "No, No" I'm in chapter 35 now I will update my review if there's an improvement.

It's a good premise, but the author leaves me cringing everytime I see the author force a gag into the story. The author really needs to pick a lane.

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All in all, a solid novel.
There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. Howver, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.
The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.
That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.
Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit.
Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem.
The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there.
Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.
They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.
Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.

Ngl, I don't read cultivation stuff much so don't expect an expert review.

Also, this is a review after reading 5 chaps so I can't rate World background as the world is still being discovered.

What I do read are good stories (aside from my guilty pleasure ones hehe), and I can undoubtedly say this is one of those.

Tho I must say that explanations in between dialogues are a bit too long, it's worth reading nonetheless.

What I liked the most while reading was the story's character.

They didn't feel 1 dimensional and dialogues actually felt real and not just forced lines like in a play.

I liked the touch of comedy which I think will be there throughout the story and I also liked how the author knows how to develop the characters.

In just 4 chapters you will notice that the MC is growing as he navigates through life and business. And oh do I like the business touch lol!

Anyway, all in all, I think it'll be a great read so it's going in my library, and here's my 5-star review keke.

the most mob-like character in existence ,
Plus what is up with your currency, one minute, it's all gold , next you change the pricing to silver like it's perfectly normal, why, literally no conversion
I made it to 13 chapters, I'm tired,
I did my best
Peace✌️
I'm out

the pacing is kinda bad like i took 5to10chapters for like a week normally that's okay but the story felt supppeeeerrr slow like i felt i wasn't reading a novel but a 3hour guide to something but it only took like 5mins kinda got bored