"Please move around to get familiar with the virtual body". Mike took a few test steps whilst moving his hands. After getting used to small movements he began running around the empty area, the only object marking a change in surroundings footprints where he had been initially. "Initiate game, BattleGround?" "Yes."
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
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