Found it quite boring.... as simple as that.Found it quite boring.... as simple as that.Found it quite boring.... as simple as that.Found it quite boring.... as simple as that.
Hey guys, author here. This is the first proper novel I have ever written. It basically contains all the moments that I would like to have in my ideal romance novel, done to the best of my literary abilities. Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to comment your thoughts.
His first activation is his nose? Really? How stupid this can be? 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
I really love the concept Herb King and the focus on that instead of sword fighting, face slapping and killing.The introduction is also really good and makes you want to read the novel.What killed the novel less than 15 chapters in is how the main character is written and his interactions with other people.The MC is not written consistently:take for example the intro: the impression of the MC is that herbs and being a doctor is his passion and he actively seeks rebirth due to his regrets in life.Read the first chapter: the impression of the MC is that he reaches the rebirth tree due to plotarmor(i kid you not: it was mentioned multiple times that he managed to reach the tree with the help of some "mysterious strength". The mysterious strength could have easily been replaced by passion, curiosity, willpower, etc and it would have given a better impression of the MC as that strengthens the intro about him). The MC ate the rebirth fruit without further thought and reason aside from that he saw it and felt a bit hungry. The following chapters are also showing the MC in quite bad or unimpressive light.Another issue is the MC's mental age: Either the MC is an old man or a 3 year old ignorant dumb kid. He can't be either. No real human is both and in the novel the MC constantly switches between these depending on what the plot currently needs.Another thing is the character interactions: The interactions between the MC and parents(dialogue, actions) is too short. It's like the reader is getting a glimpse and then the novel moves on. This glimpse is too short to give the reader a real lasting impression about the MC and his parents.
The cover is great and it represents the story of the game. The dying star Betelgeuse. I never know about it until I read it here. The game is really interesting, and I like how the MC has the upper hand over the other players. I love it!
I can predict that upcoming chapters will br interesting. I'm feared that upcoming generation will not become victim if it. ๐ ๐ ๐ .. So, be careful while reading it.
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