You'll notice that the people rating this novel badly are the ones who only read the few first chapters then stopped. Understandable, the MC feels like a cliched teenager at the very (very) beginning and the pace is bit slow so the story doesn't really take off immediately. BUT, it gets better and better the more you read it and I personally really like it! The MC isn't cliched at all actually and there are interesting side characters. We start seeing a bit more of the world and plot the author is developing and I, for one, got really invested....But, the updates are slow unfortunately so the enjoyment gets broken. I honestly just hope this won't be yet another unfinished novel on WN...
The story progression builds on classic 'Divine powers' system. And the setting of the main character is done pretty soon into the chapters.There are a few grammatical errors which break immersion of reading a bit, but other than that it is a promising story.
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