Not enough world back ground I feel like this is a mix of full metal alchemist world with the seven deadly sins homunculus but there called the seven nightmares. .... many stolen names and ideas from other famous creators shows that you could have just made up yourself to save the trouble. Literally have one punch man written word for word in your novel bro that’s just plain stealing. Forced plot of moving from one organization to another to fast no consistent power scaling literally everyone is at the same power level. Trash mc being put through so much stressed to further your plot cause you don’t know how to write a story just about him. Too many full metal alchemist rip offs what was the point of having all his arms and legs ripped off bro do you know what phantom limb pain does to you I don’t care how strong. A rapper is you should be going through something when you forcibly get your limb cut off.Dad forced to die Cause no one orginization can keep him safe for long. My advice to you is stop stealing sit down for a second and make your own story bro cause I’ve read it somewhere else
Hey Author...The story is good...👌👌The way you explained each Situation is really awesome🙂All the very best for your upcoming episodes.I'll definitely give my full support ☺
(after ch 135)The story itself and most of the cast are good and thus deserve 4 stars, but why does the mc have to be the cookie cutter 'good guy' hero personality guy 🙃His shallow personality makes the story less enjoyable. To top it off, he even says he isn't a hero, but till this current point does every cookie cutter hero shit ever including his dialogues and monologues.I'm cutting 1 star just because of the mc. He's not bad, but in the era where mc's with depth are becoming the norm, he feels too shallow
Bro the title of your story and the synopsis didn't do your story justice. I will be honest I was not very excited about reading a story about a kid sharing head space with a CIA Agent. I didn't know where you were going with this nor the fact that you would combine the two souls together to make a better whole. If I knew your story was anything like Jay Aslan I would have been more excited about reading it. I am ecstatic that I took a chance with your story and kind of angry that you didn't make you synopsis better lol. I could have missed a gem because of that. That all said thank you for a great story and I hope you keep up the good work.
I'm going to give it all 5☆ because this is my best friend's novel and I have some spoilers for all of ya lads if ya'all wanna know and he's OK then. ........oh oh oh. Beside he created this story for fun and discuss some future development so hang on with him and me a.... I mean with us
This story is well written and doesn't really have any grammatical errors which makes for an easy read, however for me this story was just dull and brainless ,all the characters seem to have an IQ of about 50 and the mc is just so mind numbingly stupid it gave me a headache ,the actions of most characters remind me of the trashy Chinese novels full of young master face slapping and a secret mysterious family hiding in the shadows for no apparent reason 😒
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