Soy el padre del villano

The door stopped before closing completely.

"Have I ever let you down?"

"Then i'll stay. I guess." My chest tightened when I breathed and forced myself to relax. Uncle Marcus didn't make me feel odd, but the chief did. It was like a predator watching his prey. I didn't know why he made me feel that way, but he did.

And finally again, the Imperial turns around. If we keep this up, we wouldn't make the 7:30 deadline. The sun was starting to set but the Imperials still had a good line of sight over the rice fields.

She actually did show up unexpectedly. Alex had been making his way to the guest house out back when she popped up out of nowhere.

Your novel is amazing and the flow of the writing novel that was also amazing I loved it.                                                                                                                                                                                   .   

The story started off very started, and the author didn't waste any time getting to the meat of everything, although I would appreciate some breathing room so the reader can get immersed. The writing is simple, but it flows very well and is easy to read.overall strong start