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Every chapter leaves me wanting more I can’t wait iv read throu 3-4 times and love it

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It's really funny that when my novel went normal most of them didn't even bother to review and now when I got him came flying like a fly and flood the reviews. Does it feels good to de-rate someone. There was a saying that a coward only hits a dead snake to feel empowered. Looking at you I feel that way.

This is a surprisingly enjoyable story, feels light and upbeat even there is some early killing that doesn't seem to have any impact on the mc whatsover which is a bit odd for the character painted so far. Feels great for  casual reading though. And the english is not as horrible as in quite a few other orginals on this site so you can enjoy the story without being distracted by odd syntax and grammar.

The story is well written (although the setting is similar to some other novels). The beginning was slow-paced and had very little character development and world background(which is still a lot lacking), but the story progression was fine so no complaints.The MC sometimes acts like a dense-headed Dunce who lacks a presence of mind but it's funny that way and his situational awareness is good.Since the system is a shop type the business aspect felt a bit lacking since it was mostly used to suppress powerful people and also it is a lot less talkative and doesn't help much( asking a low IQ MC to figure out its functions on his own is like asking a newborn baby to walk)The magic and spell system and world background and development leave a lot to be desired. Let's just hope new worlds are not introduced when the MC has not even explored the 1% of his current word.All in all, I like it and was worth reading. (Evaluation after reading 163 chapters)

I am really happy that the people of Myridia are free,but Demeter entrance will be a new beginning.All the very best for next chapter author..!!

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I like this novel a lot. Having common sense in a cultivation world seens like is a lot more op than the MC plot armor in itself hahahha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!