Soul Ascension

As  a fan of MMORPG novel, i am more or less biased toward this novel.As of now there are only 15 not much can be said.One thing to note is MC is OP right now. Also pace of this novel is very very fast so it gives little time to get attached to the characters and this world.NOTE: this review is only up to 15 chapters.

Esta novela es god, pende que seria el cliché de siempre pero me equivoque totalmente, no esta nada mal lo único que quiero ahora es el Raw para seguir leyendo

This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO.I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.)Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number.That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently.(Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?)With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.

I could only get in a couple a chapters before i had to stop.  Alot of inconsistencies and the name of his helper just kinda killed it for me.  Maybe it gets better but i had to stop before that.

Oh, my grandfather called me! I'll continue my training again. He doesn't want to waste any time. See you later cute little bunny! Hihi! Bye!

"Gracias Padre, Madre" dije mientras abrazaba a mis padres.

An object whipped the man's hand very hard. He was clutching his injured hand while looking at the perpetrator. A little girl with a whip which let out a noise everytime she dragged it on the floor. He was about to call for help, but his pary was taken down quickly.

Kai looked around her trying to figure out where he went. A white slash passed her back and she fell to the ground.