It's a good read, it starts off a bit rough but quickly improves and soon became one of my favorite novels at the moment. MC is pretty much a stone cold killer at times, but also can play a loving father. As an aside, the world has an interesting mix of technology and magic, or more importantly technology fueled by magic such as cars which take magic energy as fuel instead of gasoline or some alternative liquid fuel.
Extremely repetitive writing. Half of the paragraphs just reword previous paragraphs (e.g. "He was nervous because it was his first time." "Because it was his first time, he was anxious." and a handful of other rephrasings...some one right after the other). Then the author uses A LOT of extra unnecessary descriptions for movement. It feels like he says, "He turned his body, lifted up his arm, extended his fist, and pointed at the object with his index finger," instead of just saying, "He pointed at the object." It feels like 50% of the chapters could be erased with zero clarity lost...in fact it would increase clarity.Characters are one dimensional and boring.Barely any MEANINGFUL world background or description. Especially bad since the author seems to randomly use four different ranking systems terms for monster strength with no rhyme nor reason (stage, level, star, and rank).
Shameless 5-star author review here, what I want to say is that this novel's MC is in both crafting and fighting while the crafting part is dominating. There will vome a time when he build things the world can only imagine. Please do try the novel as it's not that bad.^^
I like this story so far. Not like your typical cultivation story where you get drug buffed by random ass plants (is that the right way to say it?) and isn’t always cultivating and shit. Also I like the way he’s taking revenge on Tina. Good job
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Now, I'm an avid reader of this book and have made my opinion, its AMAZING, I know that if you like character development, some twists, and heartbreak (ow) you'll love this book! I used to read it because I was bored, but now I'm caught up with the chapters and I can't stop. (Also, if you ask nicely or meme hard enough, you might get a character featured after you!)
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