So Good To Be Bad [Donatello]

"Good morning, my damned children, now sit down."

It's actually decent, I swear. I put a lot of time, effort and research into this, and would appreciate it if it's received better than my last novel.

Few creators manage to deliver such impressive quality right from the start, which speaks volumes about your skill and passion. If you continue honing your craft, there’s no doubt that you’ll achieve great success. Keep going—your potential is undeniable!

The main thing is the writing quality is pretty good I'd admit and it starts off with the solid storyline premise and MC's motives. One of my biggest pet peeves is when there is romance that completely disrupts or sometimes completely takes over the storyline. Now generally speaking if I'm looking for a romance novel that's fine that's what I'm looking for but whenever I'm looking for a vrmo novel I'm here to read about the vrmo as the player levels up within the VR world I don't want the story halfway through to be completely derailed for something that's happening in real life unless if it's specifically tied into the game somehow which it is not