Snow Flames

You did a great job. This is the concept really I like because we can relate with our daily lives. Would love to get more and more chapters!!!!!

Exciting and mysterious.
The novel could only be described with these two words.
Although only two chapters have been uploaded, but they still couldn't hide the potential this work holds..
Waiting for more updates.

Story heavily uses dialogues to tell it's story, a style that I myself use while writing and quite interesting how you integrated past and present as the scene roll out. I liked the mystery surrounding the novel and I am excited to see how everything unfolds. I am thoroughly enjoying reading this and will be waiting on the  upcoming chapters :)

Outstanding Story line   ,  I like these types of stories, please keep up posting next chaptera

Great, I am Waiting the next episode,
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Excited for the upcoming chapters, the story is written in a way that makes the reader think a lot about the upcoming events what will happen ? and why ? , where there is a lot of mystery and suspense, and it also seems that there will be  many characters in the future in this novel - Author, you did a great work

I like they way the story starts off, it's mysterious and intriguing. I will say the jumping from different view points at the beginning did throw me off slightly, but that's a minor personal preference. Good job author, keep it up!

I won't be able to write much because of the small number of chapters, but I will be waiting for the continuation. So far it's running fine and doesn't bother me while reading. Thank you for the author's hard work.