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Usually I hate stories with a system but this guy does it right. There's still a few confusing aspects but I assume he'll clear those up as the story progresses. Overall great story and world building.

If this series gives you an intense dosage of deja vu, it's because the other title of this series is published under the title Mysterious Noble Beasts by Ligh Spring Flow according to NovelUpdates.The writer rambles quite a bit while the MC strives to show how awesome he is after having a low position at work due to favoritism and bullying.  Of course, he turns everything on their heads and does amazing.That said, this series isn't especially memorable.  I've dropped it once and don't plan to pick it up again.  It's like many other beast taming series out there.

Never thought I'd see a reverend insanity copy, with the self  cultivating abilities trope, Chinese author's are truly shameless uncreative copying b*sard's

Hi it's me again (Noobamstard). Currently I read chapter 1-10. The story looks like it is going to be a weak to strong type in which the MC trains up in another world while he is asleep. The MC is a resident of the slums in which the majority of the population of this world lives. He randomly gains a system that gives him acces to a game like world. The world background is decent. It is to early to talk about story developement. The MC seems to be the carefree type that classifies things he gets as "trash" or "OP" which is kind of confusing since his sitiuation as a poor buffon in the slums that has to shoulder the responsibility for his little sister stands in contrast to such behaviour. The grammar is substandard but okay given that this is Webnovel. Still I recommend an editor (it can be a friend that is as good as you with English but two pairs of eyes see more than one). Anyhow I am still exited about this story and will likely read on. However, there is one thing that is bugging me: Why is your novel uploaded twice on Webnovel? I will not continue giving feedback before that is solved. Having this novel twice will ultimatley upset your readers and stop you from advancing in the rankings. Keep on writing,Noobamstard

"WHAT?" shocked Danial said. Even Amina was shocked  

    "Yes, Ash we do. But she is one stubborn person and if she doesn't use her magic, then paperwork never gets done." Asil told him as he appeared in the room and sat down in the chair next to him.

and i know son that you don't want to enroll at THE celestial academy but i hope son can go so that you can be strong

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