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Story OK. To be fair the author did say its his first novel and he isn't a native English speaker. And it shows. Badly. I've dropped it. I rarely drop books just because of writing quality but I couldn't continue.This was as bad as mtl. The bad ones. BUT if you can handle mtl or are not a native speaker then this isn't really a problem. As this was also the authors first work, other problems such as story pacing, character progression, character interaction and behaviour all needs work. Theres a lot of telling and very little showing. This comes with practice, time and experience.My advise to the author as simply a fan of light novels is to read more well written English novels. Not translated, but actual English novels. You'll pick up a lot and it'll help you construct your novels better in tbe future.For anyone who read all this and want an actual review.. Transmigration story where male MC gets into modern world with monsters. System makes him cultivate stronger. For once the original body isn't some begger or poor son which is actually refreshing. It's why I think this author with some work and experience can actually write a good novel in the future.

Quite like it despite the constant use of incorrect words, and the odd misspelling :)

For not having English as first language its okay, but would advise the author to use spell check before uploading.

It's a fresh approach. I quite like it. Hope the writer continues to post it regularly. Can't wait to see the new chapters. Thank you for the great work.

I'll be completely honest here, I want to like this novel a lot more than I currently do.

Writing quality: honestly leaves a lot to be desired, grammar is at times terrible. This wouldn't matter as much if it wasn't for the rampant inconsistency of information given out throughout the story.

Story development: is very, very slow, again not a big deal, but the constant changing of basic information given out makes it very hard to follow and quite frankly quite tedious to read at times.

Character design: I think the concept is good, and I really appreciate that the mc has for lack of a better word "normal" family life. But there's little to no interaction with others so far(50 chapters in, and we can count the people he's spoken to enough to warrant actual conversation text on 1 hand).

Updating stability: I've given this full marks since I'm only 50 chapters in, and I don't know.

World Background: Again I love the concept, I really do. I always appreciate a good system and the fact that there's a system for everyone not just mc (albeit not as extensive as the MCs but skills and rating exist for all as well as stones to absorb etc.)

It would be good if the Grammer and writing style weren't so awful.

interesting concept but falls a bit short.

I ended up just skimming the chapters at some point since there are a lot of repetetive "he freshend up, ate, and went to sleep. woke up and trained.." repeating.  

and it is to slow paced for my taste. dropped when I felt it had been aged since he progressed in any meaningful way and I looked ahead seeing there were still like 30 chapters until his next breakthrough.

Nice novel. As the author's first novel, it is awesome. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️