This story has a pretty good system, that I'm surprised that no one else has thought of it. The story is like most system stories, which is cool and all. But the thing that makes me want to continue reading this is the system. I haven't read any system stories as of late, and this might be able to scratch my itch. Thanks, author for sharing your story.
Hey there, you want to get this ring identificated ? YOU NEED 10k of gold..Oh you don't have it? Never mind, I will lend it to you for no f****ng reason. ... Oh you walk out to the quest that I just give it to you and find moreeee op items? It has to be a reasonable explication...Oh it just was on the floor. Nice.If you like a bland MC, OP items and skills Per chapter this is the novel for you ! Idk why people put 3 stars on this boring novel.
and then I think it's the right thing about it that we can get the money out of nowhere and the game is the only way to make out the difference and I woke
one of the best monster MC novel on this webnovel platform....If you are looking for non-human MC novel this is my recommendation...I will give it a 8/10
This novel looks good but looking at the accounts of several reviewers( who are all lvl 1) i noticed that that have only read one book this book the author could be botting or i could be overthinking, anyhow good luck Author-san. ;)
Now that the first volume is done, here's my review and what I think.Writing quality- There are still some chapters I have yet to edit, but other than them I can safely say that the writing quality is good. I use both Grammarly and ProWriting as ways to edit my work, so I would hope the time I spend editing my work with them is worth it.Stability of updates- I can admit that this is the area I need most work in. I enjoy writing but it's more of a hobby. So with things like projects from school, work, etc. I find myself unable to write that frequently. However, I always find time to write at least one to two chapters a week. However, now that I'm done with projects and work, I have more time to focus on writing.Character design- I feel like this category is good. But it's still too soon to tell. Johnathan is far from perfect and still acts pretty immaturely, but he tries to keep that to a minimum since he doesn't want to die. In fights, all he does really is basic things like punches and kicks. Since he doesn't have any training. Other than that, there's not much else to say. It's still too early in the story to go in depth about his character.World Background- Same as the last one. Too soon to say anything. All we know now is that humans are turned into zombies and can evolve. That and the world is trying to save as many people as they can with 'bases'. Since the first volume was mostly the introduction to the apocalypse the world-building wasn't too focused on. I focused more on the rescue arc, and the powers they get. However, the second volume will have a lot more world-building and will show the results of the apocalypse.Other things- Only 24- 30 hours passed since the apocalypse started. The three got right into it and became strong quickly. However, they only seem strong since no other characters were introduced that had powers. The only reason why they got a good handle on mana was because of anime, manga, novels, etc. With those in mind, they progressed pretty quickly. They definitely won't get strong as fast in the future since... Cant really spoil.Anyway, I hope you give the novel a chance and enjoy it. Thanks for reading!
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