Followed the story when it was being translated on a different site. Well executed story with an interesting twist. As far as I read, the character doesn’t get too powerful relative to the world around him. This makes the story interesting because rather than your typical power fantasy he is usually still in a weaker position than whoever he fights against. This leads to the main character making clever decisions and taking interesting risks. Overall, the story is worthwhile to those tired of power fantasy and who want to read a low power wuxia story.
barbaro como terminas la novela incompleta.... asi no... fuera de eso buena novela, pero de verdad dejaste a uno enganchado cuando se supone que empezará lo bueno
System novels are my guilty pleasures, especially those that have master and disciple progression models. Really looking forward to this hopefully it gets picked. 🌟
As a fellow writer about a stone protagonist, I eagerly read this story from a competitor. Their story has a unique premise that takes from a very informed background, keeping things fresh. I can comfortably say that, if you are looking for a sci-fi story with a rock protagonist, this is the story for you. If you want a different story with rock protagonists, there are others around. There is more than enough room for all of us to write in this space and more than enough readers to go around. Brother Space Rock, Little Brother Volcanic Rock greets you. :)
Some editing would be nice. Would have kept reading but by chapter 3 I was more skimming the chapter. It has potential though so keep it up. Just remember to prof read.
The storyline, the setting and everything is on point. It grabs the reader from the start and never lets you go. The depiction is so accurate that for a moment, i thought i was experiencing what the ML was. I love it so far. Kudos to you author
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