This story was great at the beginning but as the story goes on, you get angrier and angrier by the dumb antagonists in the story. Don't read this, really.
This is a high quality read. The first few chapters are spent setting up the world and the core cast of characters and I must say I was quite immersed and can't wait to read more. The protagonist is a great well-rounded character, facing countless obstacles in her early life, but has a strong personality as is evidenced by the way she defends herself verbally and physically when a gang of bullies target her. Spelling and grammar are top top notch and the prose flows along nicely, making this easy to read and enjoyable. Highly recommended reading!
Good story and all. BUT the translator skips chapters, has done it more than once so be prepared to be mad when he/she does it again. Also traslator doesn’t pay attention and fix it right away, he will continue to post new chapters after the skipped ones, usually it’s 5 chapters at a time skipped
It’s a shame the Author stopped writing; the novel is very exciting and is a good read for people who like OP MC’s. If the author ever continues, a lot of people would be happy.
Aye I really enjoyed reading this! :DWriting-wise, great, no noticeable mistakes. Also, the writing style is amazing hehe! It was interesting, and it has a smooth flow :DI also love the system, I think it's pretty cool, especially since I really really like history/fable themed stuff, like cough-orv-cough so this is exactly my cup of tea :DBest part is the MC tho :D I like the way he thinks hehe!Great work, author! <3
Dear Author, Thanks for updating the chapters regularly. However, I am finding myself wanting more and more. Now that the chapters have gained some momentum, can we please at least have two chapters a day?
a bit marred by translation, this seems like a promising story. Read it in its native language if you can. The main problem with the translation is that it seems to translate words and phrases literally, rather than adapting them to English grammar and syntax.
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