Sinner's Etiquette

I quietly made my way into the closet to get ready for bed. I pulled off the dress. I looked through the clothes and was gonna grab a nighty when familiar arms wrapped around my waist. My heart started to beat faster causing me to hear the ringing in my ears.

"Ma,"

Li Chao has to help Huang Wensheng put on his diving suit. It was the latter's first time to see one, let alone wear one.

"Asia… thank goodness" he breathed a sigh of relief as his eyes lay upon his girlfriend who had been shouting at him to wake up.

"Ha ha ha ha!"

It a great story the grammar is great but I think it could have a prologue Just saying but it's a great story

The story is very very hooking and I can say that this would be a hit if contracted. The author has good control of language and has good narration and pacing. I also loved the MC and her actions. Wanting to know more in the future. Good luck 👍

This book is amazing!!!! The description of the character and the scene, the use of words it is all very attracting. Good Luck and please continue writing, you’re an amazing author