This book is a crime against the english language. don't trust me? read the literal first three lines of this book. if you can stomach MTL level writing quality maybe this is something for you. I won't make any assessment of the story, I didn't make it far enough but the fact that the author was too lazy to even employ a software like grammarly has me doubtful.
Shameless brother of author here😂😂.
Now on a serious note. To say the truth I love this book, many of you will say obviously you are his brother but to say the truth I never read his first book which he has deleted now
This is one of the books I follow I love the fact that the MC is not so OP but still stronger than most
Also I'm a big fan of system, well you guys and girls should at least try and read it
Peace and goodbye✌🏽
I've read about 70 chapters.... where's the omniscient part of the novel or where is the wisdom that MC supposed to have...to me it looks like another power leveling novel with Fake title
Author let me tell you why you boycotted your own story at first for the early chapters, (I read until chap 27)can't speak about later chapters since I haven't read them, the wish thing is too big of a way to ask for power or destruction or whatever, the story's title is too big most of all when he doesn't get a speck as omniscient as I and many thought, I didn't want him op, but to me he feels too weak for what he asked, I can look past all that, very minor problems at the end if the Mc is good and interesting , that is the problem, you made reading him spiritually painful , he is very stupid, by plot if i understand and that is bad because reading what an idiotic character does is very irritating, you didn't even tell us why, you should have explained that clearly, maybe with a system window that he couldn't see at least then I would have had a reason to continue but you gave him the worst possible handicap being stupid and you gave the reason 50 chapters later?!!!? If you make a character like that and expect people to bear it for 1/4 of the story then I am sorry but I am out if you made him physically very weak but perceptive and cunning and with a helping secondary character (his sister, his cat, etc. ) that could help him fight and carry out the plans he strategizes it would have been an entirely different look but as I said you gave him the worst possible trait, making reading him insufferable
This story started out quite good but it keeps having the same problem. Everytime something is supposed to be bad, there is needless r*pe, unrealistic and non-sensical trauma, or ntr / ntr-adjacent content. What was a decent premise and strong story telling is being dragged horribly down.I tried looking past it as having been on the platform for quite a long time I've gotten used to reading Chinese novels which are violently racist or likewise have one-tone r*pe characters, but this story and writer keep hitting you over the head with it over and over. Only getting worse arc after arc.As a side note, this novel has a worse take on homosexuals than most Chinese novels, a genuine feat.
I’ve already put my reasoning for why this is a 5 in the dropped one (Bias) but I’m wondering if we’ll get more info about MC parent info and how they came to be like that?[img=exp]
I would like to say that this book is a good read.
The writing quality of author is good there very very few errors and the ones that is there can be glossed over and doesn't leave an impact on readers.
So far the story is developing pretty well, most authors usually rush during the early chapters but here it's well paced.
The characters are well thought out, bot the usual 3rd rate villians and side characters. MC is also well written and some can relate to him. He is dense at the start but he is the process of development, author gave a good reason for this as well.
The updates are good since it we getting quality work from author.
As for world building, it is slow since the world changed and mc needs to explore but I will say it doesn't leave a bad taste.
Overall if you read up till here then read up till chapter 57. Then decide whether you want to continue or not.
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Now on a serious note. To say the truth I love this book, many of you will say obviously you are his brother but to say the truth I never read his first book which he has deleted now
This is one of the books I follow I love the fact that the MC is not so OP but still stronger than most
Also I'm a big fan of system, well you guys and girls should at least try and read it
Peace and goodbye✌🏽
The writing quality of author is good there very very few errors and the ones that is there can be glossed over and doesn't leave an impact on readers.
So far the story is developing pretty well, most authors usually rush during the early chapters but here it's well paced.
The characters are well thought out, bot the usual 3rd rate villians and side characters. MC is also well written and some can relate to him. He is dense at the start but he is the process of development, author gave a good reason for this as well.
The updates are good since it we getting quality work from author.
As for world building, it is slow since the world changed and mc needs to explore but I will say it doesn't leave a bad taste.
Overall if you read up till here then read up till chapter 57. Then decide whether you want to continue or not.