Ok, since there are only 4 chapters currently... I can't say much, except the few grammar errors that I found which could easily be edited and the para-phrasing that could be improved... The story is just awesome! A await to see how the story goes in the later chapters!
Good novel, but a Trash Translator. this is actually one of the best novels I've read on here this month and it would have defiantly gotten a 5 star review from me even if it didn't meet the 20 free chapter quota. I think the main reason Myself and others Reviewed this so badly is the translator, This novel has great grammar but there are multiple repeat chapters after around chapter 12.If the translator goes back and deletes the repeats and corrects the chapter name order I'll go and change my review to 5 stars.
The moment i saw the title and that picture? You already earned a 5 star review, the synopsis? Now you're ading gasoline on top of the fire! You got the few hours of sleep i have everyday!
English is not my mother languaje but here we go, i hope its readable.This is a novel that could have gone big, but became bad.The world in itself seems interesting but...I can understand that you want to make an OP mc. Okey good, but if you do it, do it with logic. Make a progression so the readers can enjoy how he gets OP. The way is done here is too fast, no development at old. Feels rushed.Many cliches used in a bad way, it feels forced and boring.The mc is supposed to be reincarnated from an old man, i cant feel any maturity in his way of thinking.Even with all this issues i congratulate the author for keep going with the novel.Its not my cup but if you enjoy it keep going.
If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.
"Summer. The silver dagger na binigay sayo ni Walts ay ang pinaka-makapangyarihang sandata sa mundo ng mga bampira. Ang silver dagger ay isa sa dalawang sandata na naging kasunduan nang mga black vampire at nang royal vampire." Hini ko maintindihan ang mga sinasabi ni tito.
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