Sigil Online: I became the duke's third son

I laugh a little bit "Yeah that's Enrick, don't pay him any mind. I mean unless you want all of his coin.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

the story is wish fulfillment  it isnt realistic foer medieval world and have many characters with no depth or personality ____________________

It's not bad. The author has a grasp on storytelling, but the Asian "Brother Enzo" and "sister Ruby" in a supposedly Western setting gave me flashback icks. The  English is a bit awkward, and there's the odd grammar mistake, but nothing dreadful.The world building is decent, but as others say, the interpersonal interactions don't feel natural. They are stiff.I had to laugh at the "uniform". What make a transparent plastic swimsuit a uniform? But somehow, it has a pouch to put things in?  I mean other than what you would expect to find in a swimsuit "pouch