Starting from Fan Clan arc or close to it author or translator loses his or her english and creates their own language writing wasn't perfect to begin with but since the Long Clan and Fan Clan arc it hit the all time low. Feels like author was lazy to construct a sentence just and threw some random words to fill in
Shameless? Hahahaha I imagine Ye Qiu living in a magical world in real life. And assuming hi Battle Mage Status and fights multiple guilds and using shameless tactics to beat his opponents
What a cheap copy of THE AUTHOR'S POV. Though not exactly the same but almost the same. There is no flow in the story, the writing is messed up, although I liked reading it, something about this story doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars or 4 stars.
The storyline is unique and good, but the imprecise and lengthy writing sometimes leaves readers confused. The character portrayal is not in-depth enough, but chapter 1 is interesting to read and needs improvement in the writing. Keep up the good work author!
It was neat 🙇u200d♂️🙇u200d♂️🙇u200d♂️ The synopsis will make you curious about what will happen and when you read it you'll wonder why the monster was in the sunset stables. I wonder what will the MC do 🧐🤔 anyways, great start author 🤗
Mc is just a tool man. The witches around don't seem to care much about him other than the power he can give them and just treat him like a servant. Always just demanding things from him and ordering him around like an errand boy. He seems fine with that because he gets to be with two beautiful witches. Nothing really has happened so far into the story though. The system is just a status screen until now, I guess. Title says inheritor of magic, but I don't even know what he actually inherited. Maybe the status screen is the magic he inherited?
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