A fantasy name that filled every kid that watches Naruto Anime.
This is not Naruto fanfic but it gives it vibes. the novel took a little serious path and also enjoyable.
it's a story of strong Ninja that Travel back in time after the defeats of Human kinds by the Notorious 75 Demons lord.
But the good thing about the Novel is that, the defeat is course by the humans themselves. It's shows that if humanity has not fallen to depravity and kill themselves their power will be enough to withstand the Demons attack.
But, Greed for Power and other depravity that human fall into, it's what makes them be destroyed.
With all above explanation, you will see the novel will take a different approach in solving the problem. it's not about just improving the humanity's power, as they are already strong, But rather about uniting them together. Well this is my hypothesis. Since it's only three chapter maybe something change.
Ahem! Ahem! as I continue to read this I consider myself stopping it as I really hate how he take Selena with him, but as I read more chapters and also think about klautz pov, I started to enjoy this more than I can think, like why hate a woman if you know that she will not betray you while also do willingly what you command to her.
I hate the part where Verona interfere when klautz was fighting with Eli, but thinking about it, it was really necessary to do that part as we need it to do some character development as it was boring if she suddenly became survibedient to him. so for that part you really great author.
For the lemon part, you also do great at that author that I begun to think if it was based on experience GHAHHAHA but if my hunch is true can you kindly teach me sensei!
There was some typo but it was so little that you will not care about it.
I also like how thick skinned our mc when they were in that secret room where they first met Verona on the bonus stage. where he do the deed with Selena even she was at that room GAHHAHHA it really turn me on GHAHAHHA and from that part I know that something within Verona will be going to awaken GHAHAHHAH
I'm still at the 80s chapters and it was already awesome so I expect that it was more going to get interesting when I caught up
Short chapters. it would've been fine if it weren't for fillers taking most of the chapters. the story is decent but again, there's too many fillers for the story to progress
To be honest I like this story alot, what I didn't like is the forced deaths when he did the trial of control, Kristie didn't really need to die, his death was unnecessary, if the author really only wanted one to survive he could've let Kristie and Brett die together at the next stage, but other than that awesome story
30 chapters in and can say with confidence that Im defintley going beyond those paid chapters.
Concept is done in an intriguing way.
So far, the MC holds the story together for me. I like the lone wolf/morally grey types of characters. They can repetitive but when written right, theyre pretty kino.
Ive been looking around the site for a while for a good story to read since I joined, and Im glad this is the first one to stick with me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A fantasy name that filled every kid that watches Naruto Anime.
This is not Naruto fanfic but it gives it vibes. the novel took a little serious path and also enjoyable.
it's a story of strong Ninja that Travel back in time after the defeats of Human kinds by the Notorious 75 Demons lord.
But the good thing about the Novel is that, the defeat is course by the humans themselves. It's shows that if humanity has not fallen to depravity and kill themselves their power will be enough to withstand the Demons attack.
But, Greed for Power and other depravity that human fall into, it's what makes them be destroyed.
With all above explanation, you will see the novel will take a different approach in solving the problem. it's not about just improving the humanity's power, as they are already strong, But rather about uniting them together. Well this is my hypothesis. Since it's only three chapter maybe something change.
It's a very good read.
The character development is alright.
But can't really determine anything yet but hey it's a work in a progress
Keep up the good work.
Ahem! Ahem! as I continue to read this I consider myself stopping it as I really hate how he take Selena with him, but as I read more chapters and also think about klautz pov, I started to enjoy this more than I can think, like why hate a woman if you know that she will not betray you while also do willingly what you command to her.
I hate the part where Verona interfere when klautz was fighting with Eli, but thinking about it, it was really necessary to do that part as we need it to do some character development as it was boring if she suddenly became survibedient to him. so for that part you really great author.
For the lemon part, you also do great at that author that I begun to think if it was based on experience GHAHHAHA but if my hunch is true can you kindly teach me sensei!
There was some typo but it was so little that you will not care about it.
I also like how thick skinned our mc when they were in that secret room where they first met Verona on the bonus stage. where he do the deed with Selena even she was at that room GAHHAHHA it really turn me on GHAHAHHA and from that part I know that something within Verona will be going to awaken GHAHAHHAH
I'm still at the 80s chapters and it was already awesome so I expect that it was more going to get interesting when I caught up
30 chapters in and can say with confidence that Im defintley going beyond those paid chapters.
Concept is done in an intriguing way.
So far, the MC holds the story together for me. I like the lone wolf/morally grey types of characters. They can repetitive but when written right, theyre pretty kino.
Ive been looking around the site for a while for a good story to read since I joined, and Im glad this is the first one to stick with me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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