Shinobi From Hell

Omo! Good plot you got there. It will draw attention for sure. I thought of reading just one chapter to be able to give a review properly but it hooked me so I read the remaining chapters. Good job , update more.

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Welcome to the story!





This is not a shameless review by the author. I believe this novel deserves 5-star.
You might say that every author thinks that way about his own story. And I think you are right but I want to put forward some pros and cons pointing out as to why it deserves 5-star.

I won't be listing them separately as pros and cons as I believe that some points that might be cons for some readers might be pro for the other.

1. The story revolves around a dystopia and unlike those many 'just dystopia' it indulges in not only the dangers and injustice but also the aftereffects of such a defective system and also how the residents are emotionally affected by such an environment.

2., Unlike other novels where MC is absolutely weak from the start or absolutely strong from the start (a bit too strong making a mess of the story where every problem is a problem only until MC arrives), this novel has an MC who is physically average at the beginning but has the mental fortitude of a killer. So you have it, weak from the outside strong from the inside. (this is only true in the beginning MC grow in strength)

3. The story is mostly focused on the MC so there aren't multiple PoVs.

4. The writing quality I believe is good enough.

5. The story has a setting that is a mixture of occult literature and shinobi background.

Story starts off great, but...

I came and saw the tags, such as #harem.
I can say from the start when I started reading till chapter 17 that it should focus more on the MC because some readers just want to know on how the harem would usually start until it really becomes a 'harem'. This strange thought came to my mind that the male side characters were the harem of the MC, because the early chapters already started simultaneously detailing and focusing on the MC and the Side characters.

Introduction of side characters came out quicker than what I thought, you could've just started slow with one. Other side characters at the start doesn't really give that much support in the start story of the MC.

The story hooked me but stopped me from reading when the 2 male side characters started showing up, what is this? is this drama where a love triangle starts then goes to pentagon then octagon, so on...

I just skimmed and scanned and was too lazy to actually read because wherever I stop and try to actually read, it starts in a place where the side character shows up.

This gives vibes of Western and Eastern novel mixed together, that it makes me irritated when I think the about the negative points of both types of novel in one novel.

I would like to continue reading, but giving this review, it's time for me to move on and go to other novels.

-   Still rooting for improvement

it has a lot of fillers but it is really good, the world building is extensive and it has a nice plot and finally for all men of culture

This is a great story that should deserve 5 stars. The issue with it is that the chapters seem to get shorter and shorter but cost the same. It feels like a money grab. Most authors use the authors note tab to leave notices to readers but this story uses the announcements in the actual story to fill out the word count.
I read it for the daily limited free which allowed me to make it to chapter 130ish and I started unlocking chapters with coins up to around 270ish. It is a great story but I actually started skipping chapters to save coins because the ones I skipped didn't have much substance to them. It felt like the announcements were equal to 1/6th of the actual story we were getting each chapter.
Too bad I would have liked to keep reading but I can't justify spending my money for hardly anything in return.

Really great work author. Would be rooting for you. Keep up with the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A good novel.

However, there's various points needed to be mentioned.

1- Early wall pay chapters, with only 31 chapters being able to decide whether you like the story or not. This isn't a problem itself If it weren't for the short chapters. The chapter are too short for what the novels need.

2- This point is related with the previous one, due to short chaps, there isn't a feeling of development with every chapter, you need to start lengthen the chaps or at least rethink about how you will build each chapter, please don't fall under the premise of spamming chapters for small events that could be easily be fixed with a length of 1.800k to 2k words length.

3- The early chaps really need to be extended to at least 3k words to explain your new readers where they are and let everything set go for the walled chaps, where you could put the story on.


Nonetheless, the novel have an interesting premise, a good world building and background and the MC is interesting. What I liked more about this novel is the ground to improvement with the MC personality, as having a new chance to experiment things he couldn't in his previous life could lead to interesting plots.

The females characters are well portrayed as the side characters personalities too.