Shining Duos

I definitely think you could improve in some areas.

As said in other reviews, the grammar is quite poor but you can't be blamed for this as this site isn't exactly made for English stories, rather translations and for people who are attempting to start grasping the English language, which is difficult, mind you!

I do love the idea of the story, I really do, so keep up with that!

Character design is a little bland but I feel if that can be improved in later chapters and or by adding in some more descriptions in earlier chapters, say if you were to go back and review them.

Overall, 3/5!

This isn't bad at all! Really good start, and I'm excited to see where this'll go!

Let me know if you'd like me to go through the first 10 chapters, for instance, and give them a pass-over to make the style better fit for English readers! Free of charge, of course!

You thought it was a normal review, but no. It was me, DIO!

It has great characters on in it and the protagonist is kind of op has a great story even though it has little bit of action in the bed is still quite great I just hope the story give us more details of it for research of course but still amazing book it just need more updates

I enjoyed reading this book. From startt to finish. I like the development ojf the story that i almost could not put the book down. Sadly ☹️☹️ it was cut. Please bring on the next chapters. Pleeeeaaaaassssseeee.

It is an interesting story to read. There are often updates so you can continuing reading. But sadly there are a few grammatical mistakes in the text. The mistakes mostly don't matter but some make it difficult to understand the text. But all in all it is really good.

Good story, I am wondering how this review system works for the books since you need a minimal of 120 words. I dont have much to say about the book since I am flipping pages and still continuing to read. I did enjoy it.

The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun.
Keep up the good work!