The quality of writing for the first 15 chapters is terrible. Then it gets better. Around chapter 28 it becomes solid enough to let you enjoy the story without breaking your immersion. so far no kingdom building and not too sure how the author plans to "build" since he has everything from the first chapter, just locked behind an insufficient population counter. The MC ranges from a timid teenager to a cold hearted overlord in different settings. his character is whatever the author decides that day. The power scaling of levels present in the first 30 chapters is totally random. lvl 80 leader of village. lvl 200 centuries ago became a legend to this day. and 5 chapters later in the same place you have 5 npc lvl 200-350 scared to attack a city defended by 2 lvl 200...
well l think the author is worthy it, still reading but the story development is so intriguing and the character design , detailed description of the scenes makes it more intriguing . l recommend it
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