This book is amazing I enjoy reading it, the grammar is alright, and the updated stability is good, overall I enjoy Asmodeus's personality a lot, and can't wait for more, please don't stop writing this, as I see potential
I like your work Author and hope you don't stop writing until the very end. But i think you shouldn't write one fight with many chapter. Max 3 ideal and if you would increase it is killing the hype. It is just a thought and you shoul write your own story. I hope i can see the end of this beautiful story. Again thanks for the book.
Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more. The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses.The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers.The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system)The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either. Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving. 😃
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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