A novel that i look forward to every release date daily, excellent at everything for me, an MC with a personality and not a SIMP, gorgeous women and with personalities too (mostly Yandere), very good at fighting with enormous capacities.Keep doing a good job.
I really like this story 😍 Even though it's fairly written, I'm still attached to it knowing that it's kinda like a gender bender genre 💕 I wish the Author would update more 'cause I reaaaally want to know what will happen next 💞 All the best to the authpr and goodluck 😊
Well I can truthfully say that I laughed in every chapter till my stomach hurt. I finally found a novel that gives soul to the characters. WHAT I like most is the Mc’s nine monologue and him constantly breaking the fourth wall like Deadpool
Hey potatoes! What happened to the regular updates dude? Its been awhile since the last chapter and i wanna see if crimson mist gets revenge on that baroness and if he can get his little sister in at the sect .. dont chuck it in without a reasonable response atleast, because the story is just getting good .. ** all the best either way my friend you have a talent for story telling and hopefully its still with this storyline thanks again 👍
It's a very interesting read! The premise is really good and I really like it very much. Of course the writing could be improved, but everyone can improve 😉 5 stars for this one!
Here is some honest review of mine. The event was too direct and happens so quickly. The gaps and lines were way too much messy. I don't know what to say about this but I think it's natural for the gamer story liked this. Don't use much descriptions and long paragraphs that filled that pages completely. It could lead some readers into confusion. And try to use capital letter to every character when it's placed on the first part of the word. For example, "hm" instead "Hm, she's not that bad." And also, the plot was interesting which made this story to have a potential. No hard feelings, I love the story flow so far and it was good. You can keep up the good work! :3
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