Shadows of the Forgotten Disciple

sigh ... don't be fooled by the cover. the focus of the story is totally different. also, it is such a hard read. the story development is abrupt. dialogue feels out of place. sentences are sometimes so long that they stop making sense. author Skips some things which makes us understand what was he trying to say. he sometimes writes totally opposite things what he meant. which leaves us with scratch our head. wastes too much time in describing things which r not done properly. and I don't know what the heck is going on in most chapters. sigh....such a disappointment. I recommend author to write smaller sentences. and readers to read comments so they don't get much confused.

I had to stop as MC was a shameless pedophilic tree. Not my cup of tea. Also absolutely stupid. Interesting concept but absolutely boring and sickening.

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I can't say much, It's good in it's own way but the quality of it's writing is quite a problem. The space between dialogue and narration is too tight, sometimes it makes me confused and lost.But the story is overally good, kudos to the author!

Well, this is a very good story than some other systems story. It is not a other world story, but Mc live in Morden world in current time line. Also the has nerve problems, so Mc some time have hallucination, but after some chapter Mc gain access power to go another world.

Pretty much garbage. kiling machine mc. It is very hard to say anything good about this novel after reading 20 chspters. I like eastern novel but this novel is not a good one.

For Tom, everything was over, nothing could save him anymore, only a miracle could. But, isn't that weird ? When you can't explain something, you always think of divine intervention, as well as problems. People want to reassure themselves as best they can.

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