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Shameless author here. Dual cultivation? Big harem? Gentle but cruel? System? Illicit relationships? This novel contains everything, please take a peek, and I hope you all enjoy this story.PS - MC is a male prostitute, so if you guys don't like MC sleeping with married women (Some people consider it as sharing partners, NTR, blah blah), then you guys don't need to read this novel.
255 chapter reviewtldr: Good comedy but butcher by side character Su Changyu full of cringe and tasteless joke and poor execution of misunderstanding type of joke. Ever seen a good comedy book? Problem with being a comedy genre is that it takes skill to wring to cover hundred of chapter. The author do in fact have the skill by making the mc misunderstanding funnier, like Saitama. Problem is, author have the bad taste of putting side character in the same spot. The side character misunderstanding bring people to annoying phase, its not even funny and cringe. With copy and paste word of he just stand there, menancingly and all the daoist scare shitless. 1-2 chapter is ok, but when u even go to the extreme and have dozen of chapter dedicated to him, and still act the cringe way? That drop the quality for me. Also, the author keep repeating how he is more handsome than anyone, like i get it, u are handsome than mc, but stop saying that word every time u appear on the chapter. The side character also have the most fkin plot armor i ever seen, Even Yun Che have to salute him and call him as Father or senior brother. He is given fruit that can skip his cultivation by 500 year worth of training, and suddenly he become perfect with perfect cultivation when back then he stuck qi phase at late 20 age. The world background is average at best. The fruit alone is just a fkin plot device.
This is not good. I thought this will be a slice of life story but it isnt. Still, the story can be good too but this one is not good. MC is incapable of educating his children properly. When he was going to reprimand hihis children, they start crying and he melted and decided to let them be. Then, the children keep causing trouble after trouble and he will solve it with violence again and again.
Like really i will be totally honest, this story when i started reading, I ACTUALLY thought that this would a good novel as it seemed to have potential and then It actuall went from good to TRASH IN the first 5 chaps and guess what? IT WONT GET ANY BETTER AT ALL. I still thought it might change. BUT NO, it actually kept getting worse. NORMALLY I DONT MAKE A REVIEW I have read many novels here and other site. Like really way too many. BUT THIS NOVEL, I have to say THIS IS A HUGE DISSAPPOINTMENT
This is a good story, with good development and world background. But i think it needs an editor. this story can be evolved to like monster paradise if author want it. Just give it a personal touch It's nearly three weeks and still no sign of coming back. NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
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