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Flora est la fille de Norman, le champion de l'arène de Clémenti-Ville, et la grande sœur de Max. Elle remplace Ondine durant les saisons 6, 7, 8 et 9 et elle est la première héroïne coordinatrice du groupe de Sacha.Elle a une chanson thématique intitulée « I will not be Defeated! » qui montre bien sa personnalité par rapport au dessin animé.
I haven't read a science fiction story, but I enjoy watching science fiction movies. I like the story about having a special ability. I haven't read the tournament chapter yet, but I know it's good. I really like your work. Keep updating!
Writing Quality:it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole.Story Development:I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it.Character Design:The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits.Updating Stability:Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged.World Background:For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
I can see that things aren't getting any better, Knight and Nathaniel could start to fight at any second now. Luna's remark wasn't heard by Knight since his paying more attention to Nathaniel.
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