❝Flavius . . . ❞ Aelia sighed, sympathy only expressed in thoughts. Even Gaius flinched at the action even though it was painfully expected. Serving the same man all his life has made him well-acquainted with his master's temper and brutality, and increased his proficiency in making his countenance a reflection of faux apathy; however, handful of instances indicate that he has not perfected practice.
Though there are minor problems such as repeated use of words and some slightly confusing sentences it is overall readable. The story is good, and the characters are simplistic but real. I wouldn't pack the words like a big essay paragraph, so I think it would be a great improvement if you fix the text formatting! Good luck fellow Author!
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