I honestly like the story. Everything is good about it. Nothing revolutionary or game-changing but it is interesting. MC and System interactions are smth new and cool. The story is pretty much crack and has nice humour. There are not enough chapters tho. If you want a light read where you won't have to overwork your brain cells definitely recommended. I personally LOVE storeowner stories, most of them are stupid, this one tho is quite cute and fun. Keep up the good work author! <3
Hello, The author here. The story starts slow and the MC disappears for a few chapters. That might discourage some of you to continue reading. I have a lot of flaws as a writer as this is my first work but I believe I will improve and so will the story and of course, the most relevant characters. along with it. Please stick with the story, there might be a few moments that make up for all the flaws the story might have. Please help me Improve.
As interesting as this novel is, it's very hard to read. The characters are interesting, I love how feisty the mc is and the world seems interesting so far. I would be looking forward to reading more, but the writing is hard to understand. There's a lot of grammar issues and words that are substituted with other words. The premise is good and this has the potential to be an amazing top-notch story, but I suggest the author gets some help with proofreading.
It good, love it. Wish it wad longer. -_-bT_T::>_<::::>_<::-_-b^_^¦¦¦::>_<::-_-!::>_<::::>_<::-_-!>_<¦¦¦(・∀・)(^.^）(^.^）( ＾∇＾)∩˙▿˙∩(´ｰ｀)(´ｰ｀)(^.^）(・∀・)(・∀・)
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