INITIAL THOUGHTS:-Normally I don't write a review before 100 chapters however, this novel in my opinion has reached a threshold to be reviewed. So without further ado...WRITING QUALITY:-Out of 5 I gave this a 3. That means pretty good with room to improve. Readable enough to where I'll continue reading however, I notice the errors enough impacting my quality of reading. Hopefully, over time the author improves his English proficiency for a better quality novel.STABILITY OF UPDATES:-This is a bit earlier to say given the less than 100 chapters uploaded. That being said it's reached the initial threshold of 40+, unlike some authors who stop around there.STORY DEVELOPMENT-This novel just like most novels tells us there is a higher world/ realm for the MC to explore once he reached a certain threshold in cultivation. I got no problem with this since it expands how far the plot can go.-The MC is at his first place of major growth showing many future plots on the horizon. I find this to be great as it satisfies the present plus links future plot points ahead. -Overall well done.CHARACTER DESIGN-This section and world background are by far the most developed so far. -The MC is starting this his original personality from his past life while getting influenced by his present experiences. He has shown based on the techniques he's found and powerhouses he's come across to have changed the way he views and interacts with his environment which is a plus for me. For his personality, you can see he isn't(in my opinion) Supremely Evil no Righteous when compared to other characters. He's more like an anti-hero. A man that is willing to be cruel to the cruel while treating the innocent with respect assuming they do the same. He's shown to be hostile towards a certain type of sect because of their methods to grow stronger. I'm curious about his stance towards larger picture plots, but that will be left for future chapters.-Side characters have some personality and are integral to the MC development which is good. Some examples...-His best friend shows sincere caring towards the MC he never had before in this life or the one before, -His Gu Aunite is a parental figure who loves him unconditionally, which he never experienced before.-The first woman he slept with showed him how it feels to be loved by a woman in a romantic sense that has never happened before. The more women he comes to love the more I see him maturing into a powerhouse that comes to embrace the world to protect them all.-These are just a few nonetheless it illustrates how much development the MC has gone through up till now.WORLD BACKGROUND:-As I said before the introduction to higher worlds expands the development leaning towards a richer story. His current world has much to explore for the next couple hundred chapters. I'm curious about the various occupations, heroes, villains, legends, etc that make this story a fuller read.Would I recommend this book? Yes! Do give it a go.
As a fellow Nigerian, am supposed to rate the story well, abi??Ok to get to the matter Here's me being hones: This novel is absolutely wonderful.Both the characters and the story line everything is amazing.But I have one tiny problem with itThe MC.Aaron Wade as an MC is too...weak for me and I don't mean physically.To the point I've rea, he allows people to walk over him too muchHe doesn't act like the dark prince he is and he is way too infatuated with that Kira girl.I'd love the author to make the MC a bit more strong willedMm, I think that's all , .
Its just really boring. It sounds good in the description but when you actually start to read it you begin to feel like watching paint dry would be more entertaining.
I knew I would love this. Mystery is my favorite genre. The dialogues are gold. I could feel the hurt in Bianca's voice when she was arguing with her mom. The action description also during the exchange of dialogues between characters were superb. I'm very interested in finding out what exactly happened to her friends. This is a must read! 😉
Yoo, So I will review this novel before the author even does a freaking reviews, It seems to be good and very well foundationally. Excited to see where it goes from here. Do read it if you reading my review
"No, hey though, umm... Chris can I talk alone with you later. I need a favor from you," I said looking at him while nodding my head to Jenny's direction.
Putting her hair aside, she continues to look down at her rippling reflecting. She was wearing a black sleeveless shirt with dark blue skinny jeans. The jeans were loose enough for her to work in so she didn't mind them as much as she did in her previous life. What complexed her though, was the odd cape like 'thing' she was wearing.
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