Remember that the “battle is the Lord's” (1 Samuel 17:47). David reminds us that our God is God, who is worthy to be worshipped. He is worthy of being our delight, worthy of our dependence, and worthy of our devotion. He is worthy to be loved; to be praised; to be exalted and to be followed.
Some people may enjoy reading chapters with 80-90% world and miscellaneous descriptions while only 10% is character action/dialogue. However, my patience is not at that level. The whole 50+ chapters I've read so far could have been easily shrunk to about 10. With that said, this author's writing style definitely depicts every situation well enough for your imagination to fill in a full picture. Unfortunately, that makes story progression drunk-snail slow. Chapters go on and on about side characters and information only relevant for the next 3-5 chapters. Perhaps this sort of super-detailed story telling is your thing...but I'm tired of skimming text looking for important details to avoid growing a beard while reading.
This may be an unpopular opinion but Digging to survive: I can see hints which has atleast 98% world similarities is much better than this. This one lacks in several aspects such as character behaviour (the people are already digging and have formed alliances with over 100 members in just chapter 7 when they should still be considering the situation and holding out on digging for atleast 2 - 3 days) and the story pacing itself is haphazard when compared to digging to survive.This is a book where the MC has OP characteristics but isn't very OP in comparison. I admit I'm comparing too much but it's always better to read a better version, no matter what.
Cliché1. Gets cheat2. Gets OP super baby angel3. Gets OP 4. Stomps in everything in his way5. Nothing can stop himThere's not plot development, it's just him following his systems instructions like a life oath. No Character development as well, he's just stereotypical handsome MC that abuses his system like a wife.No world background except the regular beasts everywhere, abyss bad.
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The strategy to write and express the story is good and the story entertaining till now and the character ishaan is looks like little influenceiv till the around him so hope it will be a nice to read novel
I REALLY LOVED IT. SO CREATIVE, SO FUNNY AND SO LIGHT AT SAME TIME.RECOMEND IT A LOT !! I think its for real at the SAME time It made me wanna be like her.
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