Sect Leader's Rise to the top!

So yeah I'm not gonna go into details because someone else already did but I just wanna say that you should really read this book if you're looking for a real sect development story with little to no cliche and above all a slow and steady story instead of a fast paced one where mc becomes op just in 2 chapters. yeah so that was a little long but who cares. continue like this author you're doing a great job.

Flaw after flaw and cliche after cliche
MC has ez system but still can't sit in one place and get strong enough not to be squashed first before moving.
Unnecessary, unrealistic chats bw people.
Says one thing to do or not do but slaps himself in the face next chapter.
Very first example - Huang city was massive and has loads a low lvl body cultivator but it didn't have any low level hunting ground nearby ? Is it logically posible that sooo many people unnecessary live in a town where they won't earn ? Nop writing by making shopkeeper and such characters act arrogant in front of hunters not realistic (just from firsttown some )

Same kept repeating later i tried to get into some more and just some more chaps but these common sense holes don't stop[img=faceslap]

story progression is too slow.

system takes too much space.

and other things etc..

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so I'm not much of a reviewer I've maybe done 2 other reviews, I don't got much to say it's great so far the best story I have found in the cultivation genre and almost the best I've found in general. I like this one a lot more though   I've decided to dedicate my power stones  to this and so should you it's worth it, so much so that I doubt you can find a proper reason not to.

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