qi in this fic is pretty much omnipotent and more unreasonable than Chinese fics. mc is pretty stupid and his reason to become strong is trash when dont even have a family. his reason to want have have a sect make even less sense. we can t forget how he help a girl and boy he know for less than a week and only caused trouble for him with this we can see what type of naive and stupid character he is and we can even use the excuse that is for character development because in his previous lives he already suffered in the hand of his family so if even after that he dont learn anything you can see how forced it is.
One of the better ones on webnovel. It's a mystery to me why is it that it's not that popular. So far, everything is 5stars. Keep up the good work, author!
Hello author I am a fellow trope here to support you, nice work, and keep this up and in the future, you're going to be in the big leagues. And a nice choice of topic btw, I love it.
Hello, Humble Author of this novel (See how I didn't give myself a 5 star?... very humble!).
Thanks to everyone taking the time to read my story. If you enjoy it and want to help me make it better, I'd appreciate letting me know about any mistakes in grammar or inconsistencies.
This is my first novel and English isn't my main language so please go easy on me lol.
There are quite a few obvious tropes but it's bound to be like that since I write stories that I enjoy reading...I will release bulk chapters in the beginning however at around chapter 20, it will become one per day as that would catch up to my writing speed.
The author made 6 chapters for the status screens during the story not only it's useless, it takes up space, it distorts the number of chapter, it makes people run away.
Very good novel, please don't drop it. In my opinion, this is a hidden gem. I read everything in two days and I would like to know the Kai's further adventures.
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Thanks to everyone taking the time to read my story. If you enjoy it and want to help me make it better, I'd appreciate letting me know about any mistakes in grammar or inconsistencies.
This is my first novel and English isn't my main language so please go easy on me lol.
There are quite a few obvious tropes but it's bound to be like that since I write stories that I enjoy reading...I will release bulk chapters in the beginning however at around chapter 20, it will become one per day as that would catch up to my writing speed.