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This story is like a good beard: 9/10, would fluff. The world needs more of this fiction, please continue. WQ: 4. SoU: 4. SD: 5. CD: 5. WB: 4. Total score 4.4

It's an interesting story.I especially enjoyed the competition between 'Young Masters'.Although the translation sometimes leaves on feeling frustrated over the flow of the story it does meet the passing standard.

So the MC is a lazy character who does not want to do anything, mainly because his system requires it.  First he transmigrates to this powerful family and works hard until he is tested to have trash talent.  At that point he thinks about his family and realizes that there really is no point in him working hard as his family is one of the most powerful in the world.  This unlocks his system.  It offers him rewards as long as he keeps being lazy.  This being the case and with a very supportive family who does not cast him out for poor talent, he does just what the system requires for his most optimal cultivation.  Later his family gets into trouble and is attacked by 2+1 of the other top level families in the world.  At this point he has been lazy for 10 years which change the character of anyone.  At first he does not realize there is a problem as he does not keep track of things.  When combat breaks out he realizes that his family is under attack.  At this point he monitors the situation hoping that he does not need to take action as that would expose his top of the world cultivation.  This is fairly natural as he has been lazy for 10 years.  But with the love and care he has received from his family he first tries to act as a leader to protect the family without exposing himself.  Then he makes a move under the guise of a talisman given to him by his father.  Finally when the 3rd family decides to join in to attack his family and those who are the backbone of the family are in danger he finally takes action to save them which also exposes his cultivation.This is a very fast paced story especially to start with.  It starts with him discovering his talent then the system unlocking and then a 10 year time-skip.  The story was actually better than most of the reviews suggested, mainly because the MC follows a natural progression based on habit.

should be 1 star all around arthur gave up writing on chapter 47. it's almost a direct rip off from another book named  magic academy I have infinite skill points.

I would have preferred to see him actually get stronger to the point where he could have taken over the monsters himself. It's still a good read and really makes you want to see the MC get stronger

The first chapter is really good you could feel MC's fear and stress.I don't know but synopsis kinda remembered me a little "Squid Game" ( synopsis was short but good)Overall it seems a story with a nice plot and i think it will turn out a good one.Good job author 🙂

This is a review of the first chapter.  The main characters were only introduced at the end of the chapter. Instead, the story started on a dark night with a duchess who was trying to runaway from home. The author skillfully used dialogue to give different personalities to the characters.   The story was in a historical mystery genre. The grammar and plot pacing was well done.

the plot is good and the character though it is not yet Deep but it's still okay