Second Life: Three Months, One Last Chance

Good ol' Mary Sue syndrome compounded by plot armor. There are many grammatical errors and inconsistencies, like how he has 100 bullets for his revolver in one chapter then 200 a few chapters later. There are better apocalypse novels out there.

The introduction of the story setting and the Characters was nicely done with just the few first chapters that I have read. I was able to immerse myself into what is happening in the story. The writing style of the author is also nice. Other books tend to use so much unfamiliar and deep words to make the story more mesmerizing but this book didn't do that. It was at the right amount and it makes the story easy to follow and understand what is happening in the story but at the same time, still mesmerizing. Overall the writing quality of this book and the author is of a very high standard. I will make a review again about the Story Development after I read more chapters of this book.

This is a great idea, a ok translation, and has stable updates... But are you kidding me? This more unrealistic than the extreme plot armor isekai protags' that are extremely lucky. I have only read 5 chapters and I am regretting reading the summary (I read this so you won't want to read it).First of all no. No one will just go strait to ancient language when a new type of power comes in. Another thing, isn't it questionable how close it is to many korean and chinese novels and beliefs? Also wouldn't the sword, that destroyed the sun, be able to destroy the Earth even if it is a shard? After all, 1,300,000 Earths' can fit inside of the sun and such a sword should be able to destroy the Earth just by tapping the Earth. Also if the shards were smaller than I think the shock waves should be like an extinction bomb and would just vaporize all life of Earth. But hey, what if i'm thinking of it too realistic, after all, it's a fantasy novel made in korea. BUT JESUS IT IS STILL BAD AFTER CHAPTER 4. It just got so boring, after chapter 4, chapter 5 is just filler, and not even ok filler it's really bad! This is the real review: (It is out of 5)Boring (1 is not boring 5 is really boring): 4Filler (1 is no filler 5 is a lot of filler): 3Character's Stupidity (Same as the other 2): 5This world makes sense (1 = a lot of sense, 5 = no sense): 4After reading this I hope you understand and don't read it unless your like me and would just read it to post a bad review.

just I usually don't mind grammar but when it's nearly every sentence I just can't                                                               .

Nice book   . . . . . . .. .. . . . . .

Pls pick this book                                                                                                                       

YURI, PLEASE YURI, come on author, there are not many novels with this category, I would not like to be given yaoi, well is your novel and we respect it but it would be something not comic, romance with a princess XD

Why are your updates so slow and it is just downright downer.... i like this novel but the updates and the slow development is just ridiculous that I wanna just drop this... this ain't even a manga where you need to draw hard to make a chapter..... you just need to think and type and it should even take a day or two for a chapter..... just announce that this is drop if you ain't even gonna update once or twice a week