SCUMMY SHOU

I really like the story so far and I'm on chapter 33 I believe. the only knock I have is the inconsistent updates otherwise it's a beautifully written story thus far. If you are looking for something that is not complete hogwash and a Mary Sue MC give it a try. It is a beautiful story because it is subtle and simplistic yet very profound.

The best novel i've read in many monts it has a great plot and is super easy to read 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😘🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😘

The story is boring, immensely, I forced myself through walls of exposition that explained nothing, the author either expects you to already know 3 book’s worth of chinese mythology becore you even read the first paragraph.At one point the MC hands out tablets with cultivation techniques and the primitive races (humans? It never specifies) learn from them, then it says he gained 1% of Merit of Creation, which is considered a ‘great harvest’... What the hell does this mean? What’s the MC’s end goal? I have no idea, the writing is awful.

Definitely is a novel of a much higher quality than other novels. Im 100% looking forward to where this goes and to the day this novel appears as part of the top 10 novels.

Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!

Can anyone with a good heart tell me the raw of this novel😁😁😁________________________________________________________________________________

It's still very early in, but I'm already hooked and can't wait for more! So excited to see where this story goes! Keep up the great work, Author Elai! 😍😍😍

Interesting story with good world building, let's hope it continues like this.