I was incredibly interested the first few chapters but sooner than I would expect I found myself dropping this Novel. Too many silly developments, in more harsh words the Novel just felt stupid, after saying all that I really don't hate this it's just not for me at all.
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agh i enjoyed these 45 chapter , i hope i can skip time to read a 200 chapter to enjoy it more ...........................................................
I’m on ch 96 so far a pretty good story but for a reincarnated person from earth who was supposed to be the head of a large business then the MC is not using his knowledge to the full potential. I get the business aspect of it but most people could figure out how to improve tools, weapons, strategy, technology etc from a medieval time to something more modern. Like even making a basic cannon since he is going to be fighting lots. Electricity, windmills, farming tools, axels and spring for wagons, rubber wheels come to mind. There was mention of a magical world yet the only magical thing so far is the MC has mind control and very limited at that. There is mention of archmages but they don’t seem to do anything magical besides making potions which to me is a fancy way to say doctor/pharmacist or better yet alchemist. There is no talk of schools either like at all that’s a basic thing to implement to improve things over time. These are just some ideas. Also don’t forget that his wife from eath was supposed to of crossed over but MC has no thoughts about it at all. These are just some ideas.
"What are you doing Derek? C' mon we should get out from here," said Golrig. I turn back to them and I saw them from the back and what I saw is, a hero.
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