Scar : It's you

The author's eloquence is impressive, and every word holds weight as you read the story and delve right into the mysterious plot.

The introduction was quite unique, and the POV you have chosen seems accurate for the story you're writing.

Good luck author!
You've got a great story here, keep it up!

I'll be honest, this is a refreshing concept of a story! Who doesn't want an dystopian world? It has a lot of vital information about the story! Although I have only the few parts of the book, I can say this is going to be awesome! I pointed out some gramatiical mistakes in the comment's section. I hope that helps!

It's very rare to find a novel that has such a distinctive voice. For me, after ambiance, the most important aspect of a novel is its main character. This novel presented me a tasty main character with feeling. The writer writes with perseverance and executed literary devices like a person who really loves what they are doing. A hearty five-stars to you because to persevere is the hardest, most challenging thing a writer must do and you have done it.

The story has potential!
The plot is conventional and well-developed though the author will need to distinguish their story through exploring the world background a bit more, offering more insight to the characters and taking up the writing quality by a notch.
The grammar and writing quality was fine for the most part except some awkward phrasing and the occasional grammar mistake.
In the first few chapters, the story also has a problem with long paragraphs that need to be broken down into smaller ones to make it more digestible to mobile readers.
Keep up the good work!

Okay. I just finished reading the first 41ch. I must say that I'm impressed. The author really has experience writing, and the subject is very good. It has a very unique way of writing style, which technically, is amazing. Keep up the good work Author! Kudos to you!

It's rare to come across stories written in first person's point of view. It's a great gamble and a challenge on its own.
I like how the author has brought out the emotions of the characters. The story has the ability to grip your attention and make you want to read more and more.
Overall, the story is good. Keep up the good work author!

I've read up to chapter 7 and so far everything is good. I dont usually read past chapter 5 but this has some really interesting premise. It doesn't beat around the Bush and gets straight to the focal point of the action. Grammar seems to be pretty good as well. Overall a very interesting premise for a novel. Hope to see more of it in the future :)

the book is intriguing. like a good suspense thriller should. though i have still not been able to understand what is happening, i feel this can be a good book. the grammar needs to improve.