This is one of the best light novels out there. The world they live in is full of amazing little details, the character development is some of the best I've ever seen, I feel like I'm apart of team happy, with each victory in over joyed, with each defeat I feel it's weight on them. I feel melancholic everytime passed experiences with happy are brought up. The characters alone are more than enough of a reason to read this amazing story. Why are you still reading this review? Go read it already!!!!
The story is really good. The MC is an old monster that can't die who has already tried pretty much everything there is to do in life. In an attempt to change his undying fate, he opens a store that gives other people the chance to explore his own memories and rewrite history. Reads kinda like a mystery where the customers try to puzzle out their way through the memory instead of brute forcing it like the MC. Who knows, maybe both parties may learn something.
Yeow author here! Just wanted to rate my novel.This is actually my second novel, but I messed up the first one so I pretty much have written this just to get experience in writing. So yeah, I have pretty much taken the concept of RI (actually I stole it :>) because I like it so you can be mad at me however you like later on. I'll try to see how this will go since I butchered the power system of my first work making my work a mess so I tried writing this instead to see if I can improve my skills.If you are wondering what I felt about my work, I actually feel like I have committed an unforgivable sin for creating this abomination so I'll give this 3 stars first and change it later when I felt confident about it. I can't guarantee anything with my work other than the stability of updates since I am way ahead of the current chapters, so if you just want to spend your time since you have already run out of novels to read then I suggest reading this trash story of mine!That's all! Peace out!
I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.
This is the first time I'm reading a story of this genre and trust me, it is way captivating more than what I imagined. I love your writing style , author. The story outline is really magical and unique. keep it up author.
early review, ch. 47critique first: --infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels--sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole why it's good:--mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling. --the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out. --fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai. hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far
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