Hey man, I really like your story and I truly believe that the reason that it doesn't growth is that your cover is ugly, dm me on discord, I can help you with that. I'm an author too and you can look at my webnovel's profile to see that ^^My Discord: Baby Devil#6666(it will be free, don't worry)
Sad to see that the HDE is ended prematurely due to personal matter. Still, I like this author's writing style. It is suitable to my taste, perhaps due to me being a Malaysian too. Story wise, good start. Author made his MC start with being crippled as he went through series of confident set back to cultivate again. I hope the plot would get mature faster seeing that MC is in fact an expert and the mentor of a supreme emperor.I'm also looking forward for MC love interest, because you did not went further down the emotional road in your stories before. The fact there's some little thoughts related to xiao-ke and his grandfather made me notice authors effort in putting more effort in dialog and relationship into his story.cultivation wise, it wasn't very deeply introduce yet. I am still wondering how the story will goes from the flesh - bone - spiritual root layer. But at the same time, author hinted that there's the rumors of Pericelestial after Precelestial, so I guess that's gonna be where Jindan stage come.Overall, good start, I would say. As long author willing to keep the story goes and interesting, I'll follow without regret. it was a great experience so far since The Jade Realm, Uncle Store in Apoc, and Heavenly Dungeon Exploration.
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Dude I am in love with the world you have created and how complex everything is intertwined. I started this to kill time waiting in a doctors office and was hooked by the time I left. Keep up the amazing work. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
Tian Zhe knew it, he knew that his death won't be in the hands of this man in front of him. It was within the hands of those brats that hadn't grown hair yet.
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